Jumat, 28 Februari 2014

The Advantages of Living At Home

Thesis statement
Young people who live at home have several advantages.
Topic sentences
1. The first advantages of  living at home is young people can be better on their education (study).
2. The next advantages, young people have an opportunity for creating a good relationship with family members.
3. Furthermore, living at home can help young people getting good nutrition that can make their bodies healthy.
Introductory Paragraph
Nowadays, there are many places to live in this world. Those places spread in many regions in various kinds of model and structures. Cottages, boarding houses, dormitory, apartments, and houses became residential of many people. Among those kinds of places, a house is a special place to live for young people. That's because a house gives opportunities and wide space for young people to explore themselves by doing many kinds of things. Furthermore, the house provides a good environment to support young people live. Young people who live at home have several advantages.

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